CAT 4.1

At this time there’s a topic that practically everybody has an opinion about, its children and teen spend too much time “plugged in “ and this causes health problems including obesity. A great many people think that technologies as the internet it’s access to pornography, gambling, drugs, weapons and radical ideologies, as well as computer fraud and identity theft. On the other hand, some people like teachers and parents plaudits the benefits of technology to make schoolwork more fun while setting guidelines that improve their health. Everyone wins. In my opinion, I strongly support the second proposal.

                First of all technologies, internet are a system of communication, at this time, internet become an important way that people use to communicate. Remember, these kids spend many hours a day connected and are in contact with friends through social networks, texting and other tech pipelines. I think, they will have a great opportunity to expand their knowledge also a helpful for them to reach their goals in the future. On internet they will learn about another people, cultures, places, and music and that can be a real aide in schoolwork.

                However, there are many negative things when you use internet. For instance, a child can have easy access to pornography, as well computer fraud and identity theft. To set up the problems, many companies provide software can manage access to internet. In fact the parents have the totally control of the internet connection and the entire website.

                Another reason I support technology with schoolwork, is the fact that the technology will help them develop and grow up with a positive ideologies. For example, online course, they will allow to logon to their classroom from home and any other place as well. If a students taking an English course and math course online, he or she will allow  doing their home works and quizzes online, they save time and money; they don’t have to worry what clothes they need for tomorrow, because they are at home and enjoy their courses by internet.

                Finally, we can easily see from these few examples of the most important reasons we can using their love technology to make schoolwork more fun while setting guidelines that improve their health. Students would be better at school, the internet would have a reputation where students spending good time and help them to have an excellent academic results.

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I like how you gave examples on “how to one thing at a time”. I recommend you to white your claim position and summarize, then support you position. Over  all you have great potential for a  better essay.

for example : In my opinion, I strongly believe that the brain does better when we do things in an organizing order versus than doing them all together at the same time.)

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3.5

There’s a hot topic that practically two weeks many people has an opinion about. It’s Fast –food and national restaurant they have long been object of criticism by nutritionists and dietitians.  A great many people arguers that the total caloric content of the meal has been jacked up from 680 calories to more than 1,340 calories. According to the very generous U.S dietary guidelines, 1,340 calories represent more than half of a teenager recommended daily caloric consumption, and the added calories themselves protein-poor but fat- and carbohydrate-rich. In my opinion I believe we can stop fast-food and national restaurant, don’t support them. It’s you the customer who has the real power.

                First of all, teenager’s need food and water, not only to be happy and healthy, but they need a very good nutrition to do many physical activities. I have been informed that for an extra seventy-nine cents, a kid ordering a cheeseburger, small fries, and a small coke will get said cheeseburger plus a supersize coke( 42 fluid ounces versus 16, with free refills) and a supersize order of  french fries ( more than double the weight of a regular order). To setup the problem for example, many times LaGuardia received a special fund to improve the educational experience. I know there are many choices for using the money, but we can use the special funds to provide a new Cafeteria. Outside the campus there are many  fast- food restaurants that are very expensive.  

Blog 3.4 Summary of the Meatrix

This movie states that “THE MEATRIX ““it is the story we tell ourselves about where our meat an animal come from “. Featuring Leo, the young pig and Moopheus, the cow with a passion for green pastures, Moopheus explain to Leo by many paragraphs the meaning of the meatrix. According to the first paragraph “Animal Cruelty” he informs in the mid 20^th century, greedy agriculture corporations began modifying sustainable family framing to maximize their profits at great cost to both humans and animals. Factory was born. Animal are parked as closely together. There was no sunlight touch the ground and any fresh air, etc. fight and disease amongst the animals. They began systematic mutilations, the debarking chickens, and adding a constant dosage of antibiotics to their feed. In fact generates super strains of resistant disease- causing germs, every day and get closer to epidemic can’t not stopped.

                The second paragraph claims that “MASSIVE POLLUTION” 12 million pounds of excrement pollutes air and ground water. Communities near Factory Farm suffer high levels of related sickness. They have been destroying communities and mistreating their workers for decades. 2 million small hog farms have disappeared. Risk no independent family farm left.

                In conclusion Moopheus agues to stop the Meatrix. We are going to spread the word. But it’s you the customer who has the real power! Don’t support the factory farming machine! There is a world of alternatives.